Victor Desires Love
Love. Victor woke with love on his mind, and a desire to formulate it.
However, after breakfast, Linette followed him up the stairs as he headed to the sanctuary of his office. “You need to stop this and be with me.”
He was unsure what this meant. “I-I … h-have things to d-do.”
“And we need to get you help for the way you talk!” She laughed as she strode around the narrow room, poking at papers. She paused at the desk under the window and picked up a cog. “You speak so silly. You can’t be a gentleman and keep speaking like that.”
“B-born … th-this way.”
“Let us walk outside.”
She said walk, not stroll. But he agreed to his bride’s suggestion.
They traced the outline of the garden until Linette declared herself tired. Once back inside, he plunked her down in a drawing room chair and fled outside to the cow barn. He expected a shipment soon, but hiding in the barn making minute adjustments to his press kept him out of the house. The cool, dark space allowed him to ponder the importance of love. He hadn’t permitted Bert’s advice any significance last night as he followed the first tankard with a second, and a third.
I suppose this marks me as a man, drowning my sorrows in drink.
But he wanted love. He knew what it was to crave something. Like his desire to complete his mechanical press, though, there was a prodigious difference between an accomplishment and a relationship.
When he imagined giving and receiving love, he had few models. However, he had experienced love. His siblings’s love. Love of a grandmother when he was a child. And when he imagined romantic love, Pen’s image popped into his mind.
How was it he felt increasingly repulsed by his affianced bride and attracted to her maid?
Excerpt from Inventing Love
Bedroom Eyes Book 3,
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Pat Garcia
June 25, 2025 at 4:37 amHi,
Your premise for Inventing Love sounds engaging and like it has lots of humor in it. I enjoy reading a good marriage of convenience story that brings out these two elements, and yours does.
I look forward to reading it.
Shalom shalom
Kayelle Allen
June 25, 2025 at 5:01 amThere is so much power in knowing someone accepts you just the way you are. Love the premise of this story.
Lisabet Sarai
June 25, 2025 at 5:23 amOh dear…
I have the feeling this will not work out well for Linette. Of course you don’t paint the most flattering picture of her.
Maggie Blackbird
June 25, 2025 at 6:01 amGreat excerpt, especially the final paragraph when we find out he’s hot for the maid! Great way to leave the reader hanging and wanting to read on.
Jana Richards
June 25, 2025 at 11:09 amGreat excerpt! Can’t wait to find out what happens between Victor and the maid.